Title: The Girl from the Well
Author: Rin Chupeco
Pub Date: August 5th, 2014
Publisher: Sourcebooks Fire
Page Count: 267
I wanted to DNF a couple times but I stick with it. The ending was the action and thrill that should've been present throughout. While there was a lot this book could've improved on, I'm left with slight satisfaction. - Nova @ Out of Time
I expected a horror vibe from this story. "I am where the dead children go." Obviously, that's contemporary, right? Anyway, the writing style kind of felt like a fairytale, which was odd. There was a lot of repetition where something would be stated and restated like "she had blond hair. Yes, her hair was blonde and her face beautiful like the moon." I just made that example up, but you get what I mean.
However, there were aspects of the writing that I adored. The writing for description was more than basic similes. There was depth to them, chill and even though I felt like they were overdone in some places, I could see that the author really wanted to make the horror feel as genuine as possible.
What really bothered me was how simple and boring this plot was. It's about a ghost girl who wants to exorcise the demon from a boy. That's it. There could've been so much more in this story. Instead, the girl kind of gave off a creepy [like, stalker] vibe because she's narrating but no one can see her [with some exceptions, but spoilers!]
Most of it wasn't main idea related and while I found it intriguing, it was almost like the same event happened [with the whole creepy descriptions that got old after a while.]
But I do LOVE the culture! I don't think I see Japanese culture [or any culture that isn't American] in YA and I love that it's changed. The whole Japanese legend and how things went to Japan was wonderful! I think it was portrayed very well, even though I don't know much about Japanese culture.
But maybe around seventy-five percent in, things started to get interesting. I'm really glad I didn't DNF because in that last quarter, the story managed to make a pretty good turnaround. Things finally started connecting, there was action and I really loved the way things ended. It almost felt nostalgic.
Including characters that felt real but not over the top, Girl From The Well incorporated elements of storytelling that I enjoyed but felt incomplete due to what felt like a boring plotline.
Author: Rin Chupeco
Pub Date: August 5th, 2014
Publisher: Sourcebooks Fire
Page Count: 267
You may think me biased, being murdered myself. But my state of being has nothing to do with the curiosity toward my own species, if we can be called such. We do not go gentle, as your poet encourages, into that good night.
A dead girl walks the streets.
She hunts murderers. Child killers, much like the man who threw her body down a well three hundred years ago.
And when a strange boy bearing stranger tattoos moves into the neighborhood so, she discovers, does something else. And soon both will be drawn into the world of eerie doll rituals and dark Shinto exorcisms that will take them from American suburbia to the remote valleys and shrines of Aomori, Japan.
Because the boy has a terrifying secret - one that would just kill to get out.
The Girl from the Well is A YA Horror novel pitched as "Dexter" meets "The Grudge", based on a well-loved Japanese ghost story.
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I wanted to DNF a couple times but I stick with it. The ending was the action and thrill that should've been present throughout. While there was a lot this book could've improved on, I'm left with slight satisfaction. - Nova @ Out of Time
I expected a horror vibe from this story. "I am where the dead children go." Obviously, that's contemporary, right? Anyway, the writing style kind of felt like a fairytale, which was odd. There was a lot of repetition where something would be stated and restated like "she had blond hair. Yes, her hair was blonde and her face beautiful like the moon." I just made that example up, but you get what I mean.
However, there were aspects of the writing that I adored. The writing for description was more than basic similes. There was depth to them, chill and even though I felt like they were overdone in some places, I could see that the author really wanted to make the horror feel as genuine as possible.
What really bothered me was how simple and boring this plot was. It's about a ghost girl who wants to exorcise the demon from a boy. That's it. There could've been so much more in this story. Instead, the girl kind of gave off a creepy [like, stalker] vibe because she's narrating but no one can see her [with some exceptions, but spoilers!]
Most of it wasn't main idea related and while I found it intriguing, it was almost like the same event happened [with the whole creepy descriptions that got old after a while.]
But I do LOVE the culture! I don't think I see Japanese culture [or any culture that isn't American] in YA and I love that it's changed. The whole Japanese legend and how things went to Japan was wonderful! I think it was portrayed very well, even though I don't know much about Japanese culture.
But maybe around seventy-five percent in, things started to get interesting. I'm really glad I didn't DNF because in that last quarter, the story managed to make a pretty good turnaround. Things finally started connecting, there was action and I really loved the way things ended. It almost felt nostalgic.
Including characters that felt real but not over the top, Girl From The Well incorporated elements of storytelling that I enjoyed but felt incomplete due to what felt like a boring plotline.
I FELT THE SAME WAY, TOO.
ReplyDeleteWell, actually, I did think that this was way creepier than a lot of other YA "horrors" out there (ugh, most of them aren't even scary, which just pisses me off), but still no where as scary as what a good horror book should be like. Or maybe I shouldn't compare it to adult horror stories, haha. And yup, the book did have a slow-moving feel to it, and I felt bored a lot of the time, but holy shit, the descriptions. I LOVED THE DESCRIPTIONS. I've noticed that a lot of YA authors tend to shy away from gory details, which kind of takes away the realistic-ness and depth of the scene, but not Rin Chupeco. Definitely not Rin Chupeco. I loved that she mentioned blood, lots of blood, heads being decapitated, dead flesh everywhere -- like, this is what a horror book should be like!
Then again, I could be biased because I do like my gore in pretty high levels, heh. (I promise I'm not a psychopath though. :P)
To me, the biggest problem were the characters. I just couldn't relate to them. To Okiku, maybe, but to the others like Tarquin and Callie, I was kind of indifferent, and that made the emotional aspect lacking, too, in a way. Like you said -- real, but not over the top. Overall, glad you enjoyed this! Hopefully we'll get to see more from Chupeco, because she has such great potential! Awesome review, Nova. :D
I'm not usually a fan of horror books, so I don't think I'll be reading The Girl from the Well. However, some aspects like the Japanese culture elements sound pretty interesting. I love books that are both entertaining and that teach you something, and this sounds like it does that. I also love it when books really turn around at the end and make up for a slow beginning, which is why I rarely DNF books. I never know what I might miss.
ReplyDeleteI gave it three stars too. I didn't love it but I didn't totally dislike it either.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you stuck it out and enjoyed the ending! I gave it, um, 5-stars. XD Haha! I just love ghosty things (I write a lot of ghost stories so that's probably why) and I also felt like it was an episode of Supernatural which is like my favourite show eeeever. *nods* But there definitely was a lot of repetition. I think it was the ghost's style/voice, but it was a bit odd.
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I really like the writing in this one, the repetition included ;) I thought it made sense because the narrator wasn't human at all and didn't think like we do, so it felt archaic somehow which makes sense because she did die 300 years ago~ I'm glad you stuck it out to the end, though. This book was an amazing book for me in many aspects :D I loved the ghost's "redemption" in the end, and how she pretty much "sacrificed" passing away in order to protect the guy :)
ReplyDeleteFaye at The Social Potato
Most of the YA horror I read isn't that scary at all (which iskind of okay with me because I'm sort of a scaredy-cat). However, I do think there is a place for scary YA horror. I loved Girl of Nightmares and Faye's comment makes me wonder if it's a little like that?
ReplyDeleteJen at YA Romantics